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“(y/n) turn off that game. You need to sleep.”

“I can’t stop now Sherlock. I just unlocked a new mission!” You didn’t even turn away from the TV when you answered Sherlock and that made him even more annoyed than he already was.

“That’s not important now turn it off,” he demanded.

“Sherlock there is dragon burning down villages. I think that qualifies as important.”

“(y/n) its four in the morning and you’ve been there for nearly seventeen hours. It normally wouldn’t matter but seeing as you haven’t slept for forty-eight hours you need to stop.”

“Just five more minutes.”

“You haven’t even been blinking, that’s going to dry out your eyes,” he said as he walked to your side.

“Of course I’ve been blinking, don’t be ridiculous,” you said brushing off his words.

“(y/n) look at me,” he ordered.

“Ugggh what Sherlock?” you whined as you turned to him. As soon as you turned to him he clapped in your face, causing you to blink. Your blinking then caused your eyes to burn and you quickly covered them with your hands. “Sherlock what did you do to me!”

I didn’t do anything,” he said as he turned off your game. “That is simply what happens when you close your eyes after not doing so for an extended period of time.” He turned back to see you still whining and rubbing your eyes. He then picked you up and slung you over his shoulder.

“Sherlock put me down! I have to go and redo the last hour of work you just erased!” you said as Sherlock carried you to his room.

“Oh quit whining. You hit a check point before I turned it off it’s all still there,” he said as he dropped you on the bed. “I’m going to be right back and if you leave this room I’m cutting off the wifi for a month,” he said closing the door as he left. He returned after five minutes to find you sitting on the bed with a 3ds in your hands.

“(y/n)!”

“What!” you said turning to him. “You just said not to leave the room!” He stuck out his hand forcing you give up the device. You then watched him as he roughly tossed it into his desk drawer.

“Hey don’t be so rough with that!” You exclaimed. He responded by turning to look at you and then began jiggling the drawer. When he turned his back to lock the drawer you slowly began to pull your phone out of your pocket.

“If you’re trying to call Mycroft,” he said upon hearing you move on the bed, “that phones going to meet that wall in less than five seconds.” He turned to see you holding your phone halfway to your ear looking like you were still deciding whether or not to listen. After Sherlock raised his eyebrow at you, you huffed in defeat and put the phone on the nightstand. You then pulled the blankets over your face and turned away from Sherlock. He knew you were only mad at him because you were sleep deprived, but he still didn’t like you being angry with him.

“(y/n),” he said as he sat next to you. When you didn’t respond he laid down beside you and pulled the blanket over himself as well.

“Get out of my blanket tent Sherlock.”

“You’re in my bed and it’s my blanket, so no. And stop being mad, it doesn’t suit you.”

“You’re mean,” you said glaring at him.

“No I’m not,” he said as he kissed the end of your nose.

“Yes you are. And stop doing that,” you said as he pecked your nose again.

“Not until you admit I’m not mean,” he said as he started kissing your jawline.

“I’m going to call John.”

“Go ahead he won’t hear you. He’s at Sarah’s.”

“Okay okay,” you said giggling as Sherlock began kissing your neck, “You’re not mean!” Sherlock laughed and wrapped his arms around your waist to pull you into him.

“Good, now go to sleep,” he said resting his chin on top of your head.

“Fine, even though it’s a complete waste of time,” you grumbled.

You were almost asleep when you heard your phone go off notifying you that one of your app games had finished updating.

“(y/n) reach for that phone and I won’t allow you to look at any type of screen for a week.”

 

 

I have so much trouble writing Sherlock. This may seem short but it took forever to write because Frozen kept distracting me. And now time to wait for the Walking Dead. I hope you guys like it and please leave some comments!
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Skyrider-1 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^  Haha!  I could so put myself in the 'reader' position with this one.  I had been up staring at screens so much lately that things started to blur before I realized.  I need a Sherlock in my life. ;)
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oiseau-de-nuit Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Student General Artist
YOU CAN'T UNDERSTAND SHERLOCK IT'S POKEMON GO . NO SHERLOCK ! NOOOOOOOOO D8
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CardboardArtist413 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016
this is me
except i dont have anyone to tell me to stop
so i just end up staying up untill six in the morning 
and then i hear my mom getting ready for work and i quietly go "oh shit wtf happened how is it six already" and go to sleep
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
actual same lol
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LightxLxCandy Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Hobbyist
This is the best story ever! I laughed so loud. Thank you for this amazing story!
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :love:
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Wolfewind12 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 21, 2016  Student General Artist
If Sherlock turned off either my Skyrim or Zelda Twilight Princess games, I would possibly jump on him and strangle him. It's not that I'm I get sleep deprived, it's just that since I'm the youngest, all of my elder siblings like to delete my games and I get suuuper serious about losing data in games :D :P x3
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
dude i've had corrupted files on borderlands its the actual worst
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FanFic-kun Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is So damn accurate it's painful...
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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wildhorsesandragons Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Student Artist
I love this one so much I keep coming back to it over and over again XD
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you i'm glad you like it so much! :love:
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OverFangirling Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Omfg, so me. I'm up 4 in the morning reading Fanfictions. My god XD
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
i know the feel lol
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flaming-waffles221b Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2015
It's 3 am and I'm reading this fiction. Talk about sleep deprived
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
i know the feel :D
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MelMalone Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
I would have a second 3DS hidden from him, tbh. And wait for him to fall asleep.
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
seems like a good plan
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MelMalone Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2015
Hehehe.... I think I would've called Mycroft anyway, though. Would be worth a try, right?
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edgirl1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I can't stay mad at Sherlock but if it was kingdom hearts I would be mad
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Haymariekub Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015
That's my problem mostly
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KawaiiOkami2106 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Kids back then when they get grounded:
Parents: You're grounded.
Kid: Aw dad!

Kids today:
Parents: You're grounded.
Kids: So?
Parents: And I'm changing the Wi-fi password
Kids: NNNOOOOO!!!
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm 20 yrs old and I would still react like that lol
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CupcakeForMyKitten Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really, he wouldn't even have gotten me off the game.
if he turned it off I would have gone and started stabbing people.
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I think that would have been a sign that you definitely needed to take a break lol
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CupcakeForMyKitten Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no im just a very serious game addict
veeery serious.
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MsRaveBunny Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015  Student General Artist
Noooooo not the wifi nooo sherlock why ad my Ds i was playing animal crossing My skyrim noooooo!!!!!!! I LOVE how he said if you call Mycroft that phone will be at the wall.
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D
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MsRaveBunny Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Student General Artist
No problem please write more that this one!!!!
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ariwankenobi Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
i've skyrim for 31 hours before i'll survive 
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BlanketCapeActivate Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg this would so happen to me
... It does happen to me I once stayed up 32 hours playing minecraft
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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BlanketCapeActivate Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Only Sherlock isn't there to snap me out of it
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lnk110 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Student General Artist
I can relate to this. We've all been there. This is really funny😄
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
We've *all* been there lol
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xXDemonRinXx Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I would so cry if Sherlock grounded me
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
i would get very angry...and cry tears of frustration lol
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RiseMarionette Featured By Owner May 13, 2015
I swear I feel as if my mind was supposed to be in the 18 century. I don't obsess with technology as much as my friend does and I'm poor so I can't buy stuff like a 3 DS.
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amyrose104 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
i can't stop reading it over and over again :D (Big Grin) and i would totally act like reader chan did in this story ....  maybe even wait till Sherlock fell into deep sleep and go to the bathroom with my phone to play "Age Of Ishtaria "
Sherlock : *is lying on his couch * I will  keep that in mind .
Me : F*ck ...
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
that's what i would do tbh lol
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The-Sensible-Killer Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I'm addicted to electronics Sherlock what more do you want from me! XD
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AuraLady Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
lol I'm nowhere near that bad.... I can play all day... well most of the day.... but not days straight. Not without sleeping lol. And besides... it would be hard to game if I had the attention of Mr. Sherlock Holmes. Come on, you get the undivided attention of a man like that, fuck gaming it can wait! What are the odds of getting his attention? You take it when you get it, even if it means starting over on a game. The game will be there, the attention may not.
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DobbyIsAFreeElfNow Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is me, with my phone and books... XD
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FollowingTheCreed Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is totally me playing Skyrim.

I get like this over Assassin's Creed and no one has ever been able to pull me away from the screen, but I have no doubt in my mind Sherlock probably could. 

la in love I love all your reader inserts, I think I've favorited almost all of them! Keep on writing!
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like them so much! I plan to write more Sherlock soon so make sure you watch me so you get the updates :D
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FollowingTheCreed Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I definitely added you to my watch list! I can't wait to read more!!!!
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CharlieTaylor17 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
I knew I'd love this the second I read the first line. And I yelled at the screen when he shut off the game hahaha :p
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callmewinchester Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
glad you liked it :D
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CharlieTaylor17 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
I LOOOVVEEDD it :) haha (And oh my gosh I read that and glanced over and saw Dean winking and flailed)
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